Friday, 20 May 2016

Jordan's reflection 20. 5.16

This week we have been working on more personification.
I have thought of more personification  sentences to write.
We  are learning this because we need to make our writing juicier and to create a picture in a readers mind. 
Doing personification is very easy if you know what to do.
Here is an some examples:  1#  The thorns scrape my back with knife-like fingernails .
2#  My umbrella screams as it is ripped from my fingers in the winds vice -like grip.
3#  The sun blazed as it devours the storm clouds.
4#My lawn mower revs as it eats the grass,enjoying its feast.
There are some sentences so you know what to do. 


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